Score: 10

"Upgrade COMPLETE!!!"

submission: Upgrade Complete!

date: June 29, 2009

This is an amazing game! I loved it! It freggin' rules, man!
Job well done on this, it was amazing how you put everything together.
Updraging almost everything, it's genius!

10/10 Star Score
5/5 Emotion
Added to favorites

This is certainly one a hell of a game. Nothing really needs to be changed, the game was great, the music was great, the UPGRADES was great, and overall, this is just brilliant.
2499 Seconds to beat (All Uprades and all Achievements), so that took me what, 40 minutes?
When I get into a game, I just love to play and play until it's completed!
You've done excellent work on this game. Keep it up!

Score: 8

"Smoking Kills"

submission: Idiot Meets a Cigarette

date: April 27, 2009

The message comes out.
I know you made this to be funny, but I do actually see it educational as well.
Maybe not massively educational, but not little educational either.
Smoking Kills. It's a fact.

I've always been one against smoking.
And I'm saving these kinds of videos all over the place. Because they bring out the message.

The Animation wasn't perfect, but it was definitely amazing.
The voice acting made it kind of funny, and how you used your choice of words.

8/10 Score
5/5 Emotion

Conclusion:
I don't usually give 5/5 unless it's 10, but your case is different.
The message is a fact, and I wish people would listen to it.
Smokers aren't idiots, as you said. Smokers who find it cool to smoke are.
Usually, these people are teenagers trying to fit in.
This has to stop NOW.

Thanks.

Score: 7

"Angered Mario"

submission: Mad Mad Mario

date: April 23, 2009

Loved it, was laughing my head off the whole way through.

Sure, the animations were a little off, and the voices were kinda bad, but I loved this. The plot is simple, and makes perfect sense.
Honestly, I think Peach got what was coming to her.

Bowser seemed... a little more polite in a way, trying not to argue with Mario.
I litterly almost pissed myself laughing at this.
I couldn't believe how funny it was.

Anyway, I know I haven't got allot to say, but I have some tips, anyway.
Work on your skills, mainly your voices and animation, I'd say.
You should improve your drawing skills, too, but they don't need MAJOR improvement.

I've seen both of your work, and I'm a fan, always have been.
Keep working at your skills.
Love Prostitute Micky, by the way.

Thanks.

Score: 10

"Loneliness and Sorrow"

submission: In Solitude

date: April 6, 2009

I almost felt like crying, when I saw this.
The world today, causes these things to happen. And it's up to us, as people, to prevent it... but all we do is stand back, and let it happen, let people go into Solitude.
People are alone, because we let them alone, and they suffer because of it
If we won't befriend them, who will?

I'm going to write a nice long review, but if you don't feel like reading it, then here's it short:
It was excellent. Nothing was wrong with it. Loved it.

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Flash Skills, Drawings, and Music are Top-Notch.
The Music was beautifully played. Yeah, when you have it ready and uploaded to the Audio Portal, I'm sticking that onto my Phone!!
The Flash skills has no glitches or anything, not from what I could see, anyway, and it all worked and made sense in the movie.
Your drawing skills are expert-like, and you should consider making art.
You could probably make some good money out of it, if you were to sell some.

10/10 Score
5/5 Emotion
Added to Favorites

Conclusion:
Very well done. I think it looked better in Black and White than it probably would have in Color, so don't change anything there.
I don't have any reccomendations for you, because there wasn't anything wrong with it.
Well done!

Thanks for reading!

Score: 10

"The Newgrounds Action!"

submission: Portal Defenders

date: March 8, 2009

This is by far, one of the BEST games I've ever played, and by far THE BEST game I've ever played on Newgrounds.

The whole plot to this is amazing. I really love it, and I just may never stop playing.
You've got me addicted.
I really like the fact that you can play as several characters from Newgrounds.
It's got 10, but I have some suggestions.

Is it possible you could make this multiplayer with the keyboard? I'dlove to play this with my brother.
Also, a Character Maker would be kickass. imagine that!
Of course, we wouldn't be able to put all our stats to full and crap. You could give us a cirtain amount of points to use to increase whatevver stats we want, but when they are gone, we can't increase anymore.
You should make more levels, too.

That's all I have. I like the Animation too, by the way, it's incredible
I really love this game.

10/10 Score
5/5 Emotion
Added to Favorites
Best of all Time!

Conclusion:
It's an awesome game, but takw what I said into mind if you have time.
Make a second one too, cause that will kickass for sure.

Thanks for reading!

Score: 8

"Interesting"

submission: Cube MAN

date: March 8, 2009

There isn't much of a change, but if this was built from scratch, then you done a good job on the good ol' Pacman.

I Like it, keep up the good work.

If your going to build some old classics, then I ask you do Donkey Kong Arcade.
Ah, Jumpman never gets old.

Thanks.

Score: 7

"Heartwarming, but needs work"

submission: Why cant i? sonic and amy

date: February 25, 2009

You know, I like this. I really like it.
It needs a few improvements though...

The whole movie made me feel good, and the choice of Song was excellent for this Movie.
But it was a little short. The animation was good, but needs a little imporovement.
Except their mouths. The animation was NOT good with that. I guess that was the worst part about it.
But, it was a nice movie, nonetheless.

7/10 Score
4/5 Emotion

Conclusion:
Just improve the animation, and make it a little longer, is all I basicly ask.

Thanks for reading!

Score: 9

"Epic and Creepy"

submission: Left 4 Speed

date: February 13, 2009

Hey!

Loved it, the plot and use of characters was great.
The humor was amazing though, and I loved how it all ended.

Sorry, I'm ot really in the mood to write a massive review.
There was only one thing wrong with this video:
The Loading Screen.
It kinda creeped me out. Annoying as well.
And that thing that said "Watch this while you wait", how was I supposed to watch the video with that crying around?
I recommend you insert a Mute Button for it or something.

Thanks!

Score: 10

"Legendary and Epic Series"

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep 2

date: February 13, 2009

Again, you have succeeded in pleasing many with your excellent Skills, Alvin.
Let's see... where should I start...

Introducing Metal Sonic with the Chaos Emeralds was nice for the beginning, making viewers think "Shit. What's gonna happen now?"
Then, entering with Mario VS Bowser was cool. And the fight seen was good, and the use of Metal Bowser.
At the part where Mario JUST managed to avoid being slammed on, the use of Prince of Persia's "Time Reverse" Sound Effect was great.
The humor was alright as well.
Introducing "The Two Individuals" by defeating Kamek was a smart move.
The battle was amazing, it really was.

So, the use of characters, plot for this episode, humor, characters themselves, use of items around, Sound Effects, and the battle scene all prove perfect.

10/10 Score
5/5 Emotion

Conclusion:
Still can't wait for episode 8. You never know what'll happen.
Now excuse me while I go and watch Episode 3.

Thanks for submitting!
Thanks for reading!

See ya!

Score: 10

"Legendary and Epic Series"

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep 1

date: February 13, 2009

I love the SMBZ Series. And can't wait for the next episode.
I'm a BIG fan of your work, Alvin. I think it's amazing.

The use of characters, the plot, the script and goal to this entire series is perfect.
But I'm only rating this episode right now, huh.
Alright.

For this episode, the use of characters, and the way to introduce them was perfect.
Right now, it would make the goal unclear to viewers, but as they watch more episodes, it becomes very clear.
Each episode gives more thrill to each viewer, making them say "Come on Alvin! I want to see the next episode!!"
This is just as Legendary as the Awesome series.

10/10 Score
5/5 Emotion

Conclusion:
Love it. Simply love it.
The series is Epic, and you never know what's going to happen next.
My advice:
Don't rush your work, cause then it won't be worth submitting.
Take your time to make every single bit perfect, as you do.

Thanks for submitting!
Thanks for reading!

See ya!